There are a couple of places where you have mixed your tenses in the opening chapters.
Thus, in the opening chapter which is written in the present tense, you have "The development over time is also described and a separate chapter dealt with..." - this should be "deals with". Later on, you have "...male fashionable dress shortened significantly, becoming knee-length during the 1340-1360s, and shortening even further ..." - the verbs "shortened" and "shortening" mix past tense with present continous - I suggest you change "shortening" to "shortened".
Also, in the paragraph that begins "Until the early fourteenth century", you have the phrase "the fifteen century" - this of course should read "the fifteenth century".
I must say though, that the quality is remarkable for someone who does not have English as their first language.
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Date: 2006-05-28 11:12 am (UTC)Thus, in the opening chapter which is written in the present tense, you have "The development over time is also described and a separate chapter dealt with..." - this should be "deals with". Later on, you have "...male fashionable dress shortened significantly, becoming knee-length during the 1340-1360s, and shortening even further ..." - the verbs "shortened" and "shortening" mix past tense with present continous - I suggest you change "shortening" to "shortened".
Also, in the paragraph that begins "Until the early fourteenth century", you have the phrase "the fifteen century" - this of course should read "the fifteenth century".
I must say though, that the quality is remarkable for someone who does not have English as their first language.